tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-352303606230187154.post2126755168038748140..comments2015-02-08T11:04:07.836-08:00Comments on coyotedolphin: Big Sur Blogispherehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13080435178381510742noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-352303606230187154.post-22571179839941720132011-04-09T09:44:23.821-07:002011-04-09T09:44:23.821-07:00super stunning.......super stunning.......Hyde Park Poetry Palacehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04817313233737719262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-352303606230187154.post-21804713570016866112011-04-06T22:51:59.894-07:002011-04-06T22:51:59.894-07:00"Respectfully, he lays them down
On a piece o..."Respectfully, he lays them down<br />On a piece of bark in the sun" <br /><br />This line does a great job of bringing a sense of immediacy to the poem and points to the value of each life. Loved your vivid nature imagery too.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-352303606230187154.post-47982130773032990562011-04-06T15:38:47.348-07:002011-04-06T15:38:47.348-07:00Loved the last stanza... the curiosity of a child ...Loved the last stanza... the curiosity of a child in the wild.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-352303606230187154.post-16200024350852230242011-04-06T13:14:12.219-07:002011-04-06T13:14:12.219-07:00Beautiful ~ I felt as though I was there, as an ob...Beautiful ~ I felt as though I was there, as an observer. Beautiful observation of Nature and the innocence of the boy. Well done.Valeriedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13434461766616299823noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-352303606230187154.post-78772466719454543482011-04-06T11:54:25.849-07:002011-04-06T11:54:25.849-07:00an excellent share..can i say epic...there was a l...an excellent share..can i say epic...there was a life's journey here too...great stuff peteMarshyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08029232967141290634noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-352303606230187154.post-43918385052699294512011-04-06T05:19:42.137-07:002011-04-06T05:19:42.137-07:00In the beginning, i thought- am i reading a docume...In the beginning, i thought- am i reading a documentary? but by the end! I realized without the description there was no ending...Beautiful piece..cheers..Apurvahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12065003560676331223noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-352303606230187154.post-46810114972271937982011-04-05T22:18:38.502-07:002011-04-05T22:18:38.502-07:00awakening from the dream
warmed by the noon day su...awakening from the dream<br />warmed by the noon day sun...<br />i totally empathize with you<br /><br />when is that book coming outserendipityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13456166640950019651noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-352303606230187154.post-13710312930766063602011-04-05T20:27:30.894-07:002011-04-05T20:27:30.894-07:00Quite vivid the imagery is!Quite vivid the imagery is!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-352303606230187154.post-22675948983178354792011-04-05T19:01:52.638-07:002011-04-05T19:01:52.638-07:00well that spider woman is rather gruesome...thank ...well that spider woman is rather gruesome...thank goodness for little boys...with sticks...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-352303606230187154.post-49072502712159407072011-04-05T17:43:19.608-07:002011-04-05T17:43:19.608-07:00a lot of great description here!a lot of great description here!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-352303606230187154.post-90041034326898314112011-04-05T17:36:06.160-07:002011-04-05T17:36:06.160-07:00"With hints of black cherry and chocolate,&qu..."With hints of black cherry and chocolate," Who could ask for more. A beautiful fall into a somewhat sad but beautifully detailed end.Tashtoohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15847190224960829574noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-352303606230187154.post-69864276180008591102011-04-05T17:35:08.657-07:002011-04-05T17:35:08.657-07:00Vivid and fun to read. Loved it Tiger. (little boy...Vivid and fun to read. Loved it Tiger. (little boys will be little boys :)) Keep em coming. Enjoy your poems very much. xoAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-352303606230187154.post-60030569218285521832011-04-05T17:34:03.156-07:002011-04-05T17:34:03.156-07:00Well done,this brought to mind many a web and a lo...Well done,this brought to mind many a web and a lot of Grace. Blessings to you Tiger from The Red Rocks!Crystal Spirit Guidehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09456773675971678619noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-352303606230187154.post-81236812812736557832011-04-05T17:26:53.511-07:002011-04-05T17:26:53.511-07:00This is so richly layered. I think it is one of yo...This is so richly layered. I think it is one of your best. There is something here I really need to meditate upon. The spider really scares me and then the boy brings it right down to earth - literally. Thank you _/|\_Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com