tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-352303606230187154.post241031112590900854..comments2015-02-08T11:04:07.836-08:00Comments on coyotedolphin: Big Sur Blogispherehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13080435178381510742noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-352303606230187154.post-36614184338609787922011-03-15T07:41:47.042-07:002011-03-15T07:41:47.042-07:00lovely coyote.. children can often define common ...lovely coyote.. children can often define common logic better than adults and make them step back to observe their doings.. here's my potluck.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/04/27/cheesecake/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-352303606230187154.post-2534238265997122972011-03-14T10:37:26.858-07:002011-03-14T10:37:26.858-07:00moving words.
vivid imagery,
A++moving words.<br /><br />vivid imagery,<br />A++Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-352303606230187154.post-87261665568748460852011-03-14T10:15:07.828-07:002011-03-14T10:15:07.828-07:00This is beautiful! The way you have captured a ch...This is beautiful! The way you have captured a child's curiosity well asking very hard questions. The deep philosophical undertone is outstanding!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-352303606230187154.post-59562156755507041332011-03-13T19:34:40.700-07:002011-03-13T19:34:40.700-07:00Greetings!
Thanks for the lovely contribution to ...Greetings!<br /><br />Thanks for the lovely contribution to potluck on week 25, <br /><br />week 26 is open NOW, we treasury your poetry<br /><br />and welcome you in in your personal convenience…old poems are welcome!<br /><br />xoxoxAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-352303606230187154.post-72976826376224084192011-03-12T08:02:06.270-08:002011-03-12T08:02:06.270-08:00Hi Tiger
Oh, you put the child in you out in the ...Hi Tiger<br /><br />Oh, you put the child in you out in the open.. loved your last lines so much...<br /><br />ॐ नमः शिवाय<br />Om Namah Shivaya<br />http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/03/whispers-memories-from-living.html<br />At Twitter @VerseEveryDayShashidhar Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-352303606230187154.post-26008055056996600392011-03-12T06:30:09.254-08:002011-03-12T06:30:09.254-08:00As good as it gets. Love this Tiger. Felt emotion ...As good as it gets. Love this Tiger. Felt emotion and childhood fears. Bravo. Keep sharing.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-352303606230187154.post-51449183522152142392011-03-10T04:50:41.731-08:002011-03-10T04:50:41.731-08:00you capture truly both the eagerness and innocence...you capture truly both the eagerness and innocence of a child and his questions...a gentle piece filled with deeper undertones. Thank you for sharing it with us.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-352303606230187154.post-49639233317153449502011-03-09T21:38:54.740-08:002011-03-09T21:38:54.740-08:00Heartfelt piece!
Children often amuse us with the...Heartfelt piece!<br /><br />Children often amuse us with their curiosity- but more often than not, their questions are more than what we would want to be reminded about..<br /><br />Children are blessed that they can talk, as adults, we lose voice- somethings are best kept if not talked about :)<br /><br />A very fine piece<br /><br />Hugs xxxOliviahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11755748082674775369noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-352303606230187154.post-4062766796414409072011-03-09T12:39:28.373-08:002011-03-09T12:39:28.373-08:00oh...as a parent that really moved me...lovely poe...oh...as a parent that really moved me...lovely poemMarshyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08029232967141290634noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-352303606230187154.post-38362754926952898012011-03-09T08:09:59.383-08:002011-03-09T08:09:59.383-08:00i can see and feel the child behind your words..wi...i can see and feel the child behind your words..wide eyed, vulnerable, honest - great write tiger - gentle as a lamb if i may say soClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-352303606230187154.post-44471670374448744662011-03-08T23:48:40.215-08:002011-03-08T23:48:40.215-08:00Beautiful...I always believed that that twinkling ...Beautiful...I always believed that that twinkling stars would always be there for me...still do.gennepherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04018211831385587676noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-352303606230187154.post-35389701663514610102011-03-08T23:33:52.148-08:002011-03-08T23:33:52.148-08:00Oh, it's fantastic! It's rangey and free-f...Oh, it's fantastic! It's rangey and free-falling yet well constructed, and the voice so plaintive...<br /><br />...Mommy, what would happen<br />If I went to sleep and never woke up?<br />Would the stars still shine?<br />Would the sun come up?...<br /><br />So simple and yet, the idea is wretched! I shall kiss my daughter and never let her go!<br /><br />Very wonderful indeed.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-352303606230187154.post-7925751438477019842011-03-08T19:43:23.358-08:002011-03-08T19:43:23.358-08:00This comment has been removed by a blog administrator.Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-352303606230187154.post-6252865183772851232011-03-08T18:43:28.610-08:002011-03-08T18:43:28.610-08:00Good question. Unfortunately, there's only one...Good question. Unfortunately, there's only one way to find out. I really like the line "Or would I just lie there like snow?" It implies the essence of death; cold, white, and unmoving.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-352303606230187154.post-8373314192381832262011-03-08T18:25:49.879-08:002011-03-08T18:25:49.879-08:00whew...children ask some pretty profound questions...whew...children ask some pretty profound questions and you captured it well...death is such a mystery...i wonder what it will be...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-352303606230187154.post-70843551637209815042011-03-08T18:13:14.961-08:002011-03-08T18:13:14.961-08:00very well done Tiger. childs voice and worldview....very well done Tiger. childs voice and worldview.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16079356332629039896noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-352303606230187154.post-25966212416179815442011-03-08T16:36:04.391-08:002011-03-08T16:36:04.391-08:00Tiger, you touched my heart with this one. I love ...Tiger, you touched my heart with this one. I love it, so innocent, quizzical, and full of the imagination of childhood.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-352303606230187154.post-70760201320754311032011-03-08T15:56:12.915-08:002011-03-08T15:56:12.915-08:00a child's heart. A secret a child will keep. S...a child's heart. A secret a child will keep. Sudden hugs and kisses to assure mum and dad he/she is here todayamoz1939https://www.blogger.com/profile/09435194046100303147noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-352303606230187154.post-43021326642178475782011-03-08T15:54:32.142-08:002011-03-08T15:54:32.142-08:00Thanks Coyote. Interesting poem. Some feelings thr...Thanks Coyote. Interesting poem. Some feelings through the expression on the child within. Nice. I would like to know...are you expressing your own older memories...or recent recall/feelings, or neither? Thanks, A.Aphroditehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14174112791021331698noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-352303606230187154.post-4942800950624464582011-03-08T15:37:32.299-08:002011-03-08T15:37:32.299-08:00Love the way you speak with a child's voice. T...Love the way you speak with a child's voice. The reader can hear the questioning see the furrowing of the brow and even a tear cresting the eyelid<br /><br />sweet my friend<br />thanks for sharing with One Shot<br /><br />MoonieAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13414513238308254080noreply@blogger.com