Essence of Sandalwood
As I contemplate
What I am about to write,
I stop to notice
The curling smoke
Of the incense
Just lit.
In its every movement,
There is grace,
As if touched
By a whispered breeze
From most gentle
And elegant lips.
These caresses
Leave elastic reflections
And supple images,
In arching tumbles,
Plaintiff stretches,
And humble bends.
Divine Yoga!
Unleashed.
Whose formulas,
Freed from regimen,
Cannot be known.
And in the lapse
Of an inquiring moment,
The beauty is already done.
this is amazing.
ReplyDeletebeauty is done already..
cool sentiments.
A++
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ReplyDeleteVery nice. a meditaion of spirit and soul
ReplyDeletebeautiful. I felt peace :)
ReplyDeletePerfect - you have really captured the moment of capturing a moment
ReplyDeleteOh I am wafting with the scent of Sandalwood...lovely feeling. :)
ReplyDeleteMy favorite lines: "In its every moment/There is grace."
ReplyDeleteAnjie
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Lovely lines...will think of them everyday when I light sandalwood sticks!
ReplyDeleteas again....
ReplyDeleteyour words....
capture an image....
i see the incense smoke....
wafting upwards...
blowing your thoughts
my way......
"Leave elastic reflections"...
ReplyDeleteLoved this line. Your poem has so much life to it. Nice job!
nice...i love watching the smoke dance...nice capture...
ReplyDeleteMy favorite scent! I can so fall into the silence as I feel it dance through the air. A moment of peace discovered in what is shaping up to be a hectic day. Much needed and much appreciated...I'm going to take my lunch hour and just "breathe" Thank you!
ReplyDeleteNice....The smoke dance.....-I love that
ReplyDeleteLovely piece, the imagery you create is subtle, yet engulfing... fantastic write.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful.
ReplyDeleteYour words have done the unthinkable ... sandalwood is not one of my favorite scents ... but in this poem you have made it gracefully beautiful so I have an affinity for it now that I didn't with just my sense of smell ;-)
ReplyDeletehow are you?
ReplyDeleteblessings..
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